As I thought previously, a tad too short in it's descriptions and one with a little less choice than I would've liked, especially for a story that ought to have appeared a bit more epic than it did.
Certainly not bad but not imho one of the best even among the shorter gamebooks on this site.
sabino alves Thu Apr 30 21:34:49 2015
Paul Weston Wed May 20 21:11:01 2015
Wow, that was really cool. The first one I have ever played and an excellent introduction to the game system it was. I almost died would you believe but I just managed to survive. I am especially happy as the game works with my screen reader software. As I am totally blind I rely on what JAWS tells me and it managed to tell me everything that was going on. I will definitely be back to play more. Thanks
Falcon Wed Jul 15 12:33:40 2015
Very easy to complete, and my stats were also quite sub-par to begin with.
demoman Sun Jul 19 07:47:33 2015
investigate stone circle but do not attack black robed creature
Zeke Fri Dec 4 19:03:58 2015
Beat 1st time through!
garfield Ork Thu Dec 31 00:46:27 2015
happy memories i enjoyed that
David Sun Jan 31 19:12:47 2016
I really like it but really short if you take the right paths
Ghozt Tue Feb 9 08:56:43 2016
10/10 Would kill my fake-father again.
desertsteppe Wed Jul 6 15:57:50 2016
Thank you for making this. It was very enjoyable.
S0UL 1NF3RNO Thu Aug 18 17:00:22 2016
NO DEATHS REALLY ENJOYED IT CARRY ON WRITING
odin Mon Aug 22 16:26:33 2016
Stuart Lloyd Tue Aug 23 20:03:22 2016
Thanks for the comments, guys.
Odin - you said it all.
Yaztromo Thu Aug 25 17:20:49 2016
Hi Stuart, I'd love if you converted this into a one-shot AFF module and get it uploaded in Arion Games' page with free amateur adventures.
AlogicA Sat Aug 27 00:39:15 2016
Too Easy, Too Short, but enjoyable nonetheless
Stuart Lloyd Sun Aug 28 22:30:09 2016
Yaztromo - that's a great idea. I'l put it on my list.
xman Fri Sep 9 19:38:46 2016
This was fun, though it was short. overall it was well done
Yaztromo Fri Sep 9 22:59:09 2016
I'm glad you liked it and looking forward for the results!
paul Sat Sep 17 20:49:08 2016
erm, not much story. just about ok for free
John Dow Sat Oct 1 02:57:35 2016
Caleb Sat Oct 1 16:27:38 2016
Good storyline. An happy ending. Zaphos is a cool name for an evil wizard. But he never stood a chance against my righteous blade!
May all the Foul Forces of Evil perish in such a way! My house is restored an I'm coming to get you!
my guy just gave up Sun Oct 2 17:44:26 2016
this is lame
Jake Fri Nov 11 00:09:04 2016
This kinda sucked, it took me no more than five minutes...
Rahila Sat Nov 12 20:12:03 2016
Thanks for writing this book! I really enjoyed it. Especially the fighting paarts. As I have completed this book successfully, I have learnt an important lesson. One way to silence one's enemies forever, is to use their weakness against them. :-).
Cami Mon Feb 6 22:40:26 2017
Very enjoyable short adventure.
dingo Tue Feb 21 19:48:10 2017
Too short for my liking, the plot is thought up in less then a minute, still. Writing game books could be hard.