As I thought previously, a tad too short in it's descriptions and one with a little less choice than I would've liked, especially for a story that ought to have appeared a bit more epic than it did.
Certainly not bad but not imho one of the best even among the shorter gamebooks on this site.
sabino alves Thu Apr 30 21:34:49 2015
Paul Weston Wed May 20 21:11:01 2015
Wow, that was really cool. The first one I have ever played and an excellent introduction to the game system it was. I almost died would you believe but I just managed to survive. I am especially happy as the game works with my screen reader software. As I am totally blind I rely on what JAWS tells me and it managed to tell me everything that was going on. I will definitely be back to play more. Thanks
Falcon Wed Jul 15 12:33:40 2015
Very easy to complete, and my stats were also quite sub-par to begin with.
demoman Sun Jul 19 07:47:33 2015
investigate stone circle but do not attack black robed creature
Zeke Fri Dec 4 19:03:58 2015
Beat 1st time through!
garfield Ork Thu Dec 31 00:46:27 2015
happy memories i enjoyed that
David Sun Jan 31 19:12:47 2016
I really like it but really short if you take the right paths
Ghozt Tue Feb 9 08:56:43 2016
10/10 Would kill my fake-father again.
desertsteppe Wed Jul 6 15:57:50 2016
Thank you for making this. It was very enjoyable.
S0UL 1NF3RNO Thu Aug 18 17:00:22 2016
NO DEATHS REALLY ENJOYED IT CARRY ON WRITING
odin Mon Aug 22 16:26:33 2016
Stuart Lloyd Tue Aug 23 20:03:22 2016
Thanks for the comments, guys.
Odin - you said it all.
Yaztromo Thu Aug 25 17:20:49 2016
Hi Stuart, I'd love if you converted this into a one-shot AFF module and get it uploaded in Arion Games' page with free amateur adventures.
AlogicA Sat Aug 27 00:39:15 2016
Too Easy, Too Short, but enjoyable nonetheless
Stuart Lloyd Sun Aug 28 22:30:09 2016
Yaztromo - that's a great idea. I'l put it on my list.
xman Fri Sep 9 19:38:46 2016
This was fun, though it was short. overall it was well done
Yaztromo Fri Sep 9 22:59:09 2016
I'm glad you liked it and looking forward for the results!
paul Sat Sep 17 20:49:08 2016
erm, not much story. just about ok for free
John Dow Sat Oct 1 02:57:35 2016
Caleb Sat Oct 1 16:27:38 2016
Good storyline. An happy ending. Zaphos is a cool name for an evil wizard. But he never stood a chance against my righteous blade!
May all the Foul Forces of Evil perish in such a way! My house is restored an I'm coming to get you!
my guy just gave up Sun Oct 2 17:44:26 2016
this is lame
Jake Fri Nov 11 00:09:04 2016
This kinda sucked, it took me no more than five minutes...
Rahila Sat Nov 12 20:12:03 2016
Thanks for writing this book! I really enjoyed it. Especially the fighting paarts. As I have completed this book successfully, I have learnt an important lesson. One way to silence one's enemies forever, is to use their weakness against them. :-).
Cami Mon Feb 6 22:40:26 2017
Very enjoyable short adventure.
dingo Tue Feb 21 19:48:10 2017
Too short for my liking, the plot is thought up in less then a minute, still. Writing game books could be hard.
blue Thu Mar 30 21:32:14 2017
An oddly quick yet satisfying game. The battles could be overly easy with some lucky dice rolls. The gameplay and need to find certain things was well moderated. Some more backstory would be OK, but not essential. Great plot twist at the end. Grade: 96
Eva Mon Apr 3 18:55:51 2017
Short, and sweet. Nice domestic twist on an expected dungeon crawl. :)