Good storyline. An happy ending. Zaphos is a cool name for an evil wizard. But he never stood a chance against my righteous blade!
May all the Foul Forces of Evil perish in such a way! My house is restored an I'm coming to get you!
my guy just gave up Sun Oct 2 17:44:26 2016
this is lame
Jake Fri Nov 11 00:09:04 2016
This kinda sucked, it took me no more than five minutes...
Rahila Sat Nov 12 20:12:03 2016
Thanks for writing this book! I really enjoyed it. Especially the fighting paarts. As I have completed this book successfully, I have learnt an important lesson. One way to silence one's enemies forever, is to use their weakness against them. :-).
Cami Mon Feb 6 22:40:26 2017
Very enjoyable short adventure.
dingo Tue Feb 21 19:48:10 2017
Too short for my liking, the plot is thought up in less then a minute, still. Writing game books could be hard.
blue Thu Mar 30 21:32:14 2017
An oddly quick yet satisfying game. The battles could be overly easy with some lucky dice rolls. The gameplay and need to find certain things was well moderated. Some more backstory would be OK, but not essential. Great plot twist at the end. Grade: 96
Eva Mon Apr 3 18:55:51 2017
Short, and sweet. Nice domestic twist on an expected dungeon crawl. :)
Migo Tue Apr 18 04:02:01 2017
Very short, quite clichéd.
P Stringer Sun Jun 18 00:49:31 2017
a Sun Dec 24 09:03:51 2017
too much short! But it was quite good to play.
Jack Mon Feb 12 05:33:17 2018
Grettir Fri Mar 16 21:26:21 2018
Blimey, that was easy. First go - about three minutes.