I would like to extend an invitation to everyone on the guestbook to join a new Chronicles of Arborell yahoo group that I have started. The group has two particular points of interest. The first is as a news and discussion point for the Chronicles of Arborell, a gamebook series of great interest to myself, and secondly as a meeting place for authors and readers interested in digitally based gamebook titles and the possibilities developing for gamebook authors with the emergence of hand-held digital devices such as the ipod and iphone.
There is a wealth of great gamebooks to be found here and it would be exciting to have some of the talent that created them participating in the discussions to come at the group.
Hi Gaetano. Oh cool, I live in the UK, England to be precise. I was just curious because your name is an uncommon one. Anyway, I hope you can put something together in the not too distant future and upload it for online play to this website. In my opinion your writing is exceptional and I thoroughly enjoyed both house of horror and of course soul tracker.
Hi Gaetano. Wow, so few words and already your motivated, perhaps all you needed was the final nudge to get the ideas flowing? *smile*. I'll check out the film Moon of course, but if you've ever seen alien the original motion picture then I'm sure that'll give you a couple more ideas as well as hopefully a sleepless night or too hehehehe. Incidentally, which country do you reside in?
All right, you've motivated me. I have a seed of an idea that's been swilling around in my head about a story set in space with some horror elements. Maybe I'll start tapping the keyboard and see what comes out. It might take a few months, however.
Hi Gaetano. Well, all I can hope for is that you do something along similar lines to Soul Tracker, perhaps a sequel or a spin off or something entirely different, perhaps an adventure set aboard a spaceship maybe? Anyway thanks for Soul Tracker and house of horror, I'll be keeping a keen ear out for anything new you produce.
Thanks for the kind words, Ibrahim. I've thought about writing another adventure, although I'm not sure where I would go with it. I do like trying things out that I haven't done before. The most recent thing I did (along with several other authors on this site) was pen a fantasy adventure for the Iphone http://www.gamebookadventures.com "Slaves of Rema" was a really fun experience.
However, to keep up my writing practice, I may very well write up something else and submit it to The Fighting Fantasy Project. Not sure if I'll stick with fantasy, or do something Sci-Fi, or horror, or something such as Soul Tracker that combines several genres.
Hi Gaetano, I really really enjoyed Soul Tracker, that was a fantastic story. Are you going to produce any more titles along a similar vein? I like the macho motorcycle rider theme, big guys with big guns saving the city or whatever, sort of reminds me of the mad max movies if you've watched those.
The entries are in and the voting period for the 2010 Windhammer Prize for Short Gamebook Fiction has now begun. Entries can be found at the Windhammer Prize page at http://www.arborell.com/windhammer_prize_2010.html and are all available for download as pdf files. Five entries have been accepted this year, all having met the submission criteria.
The entries are:
Red World by Zachary Carango, Sharkbait's Revenge by Stuart Lloyd, The Word Fell Silent by Kieran Coghlan, The Tower of Ardanor by Travis Casey, and The Gates of Heaven and Hell by Ashton Saylor.
I invite everyone who enjoys gamebook fiction to download these great entries and participate in the vote that will determine this year's competition winner. All feedback is greatly appreciated.
Regards Wayne Densley Windhammer Prize http://www.arborell.com/
I have a quick question about a difference between the online version of Hellfire versus the original Word document:
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The Metal Sentinel can be eliminated by using a Dispel Illusion scroll in the original Word document version, but when I try the same strategy in the website's version, I'm told that the spell failed. Is this something to shake things up for people by adding some new difficulties, or am I just doing it wrong?
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It sounds like a mistake on my part. I will look into it.
Regarding my ROTS query (the fairies) I probably should have mapped out every possible scenario before asking you the question I did. As I'm sure you know, however, once one discovers what feels like the true path, one is hesitant to go exploring all the potential dead-ends.. especially when there is potentially much, much more in the game to contend with! :)
Regarding the Trinitour in Riders of the Storm:
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Please, no apologies! If a player had weathered Hellfire, then they should know to expect the unexpected in ROTS! It took me a few gambles to figure out what I needed to do, but I got there. (I will admit, however, that deep deep into the game I used my IE Explorer 'history' cache to "redo" certain areas so as to maximize my chances of completing the game. For instance, if I was already high on Skill and relatively-speaking okay on Stamina I would pour all I could into battling the Vampires and Sabretooths of the world to gain as many teeth as possible.. especially if it garnered me relatively little in the way of Stamina loss.) Sure, I know that can be construed as "cheating", but I was so very eager to complete the game!
Also, by that time I'd realized that not every scenario that garnered you a letter in the Messenger's D-E-A-T-H countdown was absolutely necessary to complete the game.. but by then my Stamina was on fumes and prayers! ;) Thank the Lord for IE History.
By that juncture of the game I knew it was relatively safe to use my final 'ask Triny' at practically every move and turn.. and I used it before, during and after my encounter with the God-headed Hydra! Thankfully, the final Trinitour 'call' wasn't encumbant on the player's discretion. (By then you'd felt like you went through a 12-round boxing match!) :)
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Like I said, difficult.. yes. Rip-your-hair-out at times.. yes. Ultimately satisifying.. a resounding Yes!
You got quite a few repeat reads from me and, let's face it, at the root of it all, isn't that what every writer wants? I think your stories warranted it.
And, last but not least.. (and I'll try to be brief here if anyone's still reading my overly verbacious post)..
I bought a PS3 about a year ago. It's still in the box. I was thinking about bringing it out and giving it a go a few days before I discovered this site. Thanks to this site (and specifically Phil's and Gaetano's stories), it's still sitting in that box. I think, in this day and age, that says something. You deserve a high amount of credit.. and by virtue of that, many other writers at this site are guaranteed to have their works looked at by me.
The fairies were to do with the fairy dust you must avoided earlier on because if you didn't then you would have had this reference: 370 Without warning the Fairy on your shoulder spits in your face! Then all of the others begin to boo you. “What's wrong?” you ask, “What have I done?” The Fairy on your shoulder flies above you and joins his brothers in circling around you, “You have walked through that disgusting fairy dust haven't you?” You hold your hands up and say defensively, “So what if I have? That shouldn't offend Fairies.” There is more booing before one of them flies right in front of your face, “We are not Fairies though, we are Fallen Angels.” Your eyes widen in shock, your heart leaps into your mouth and you struggle to free your sword from its scabbard. This just causes the Fallen to jeer and laugh at you, “Pathetic human scum!” they start to sing. At last you free your sword from its scabbard, but not before your tormentors cast some sort of spell over you, causing your actions to become incredibly slow and your joints to turn stiff till they freeze up. A few moments later and you can just about some up the strength to move your eyes downwards, where you notice, in a moment of stark horror, that your legs have turned to stone! It's not long before the rest of you follows. “Put it with the others.” says the leader of the Fallen...
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As for the Trinitour, well ... I have no real excuses :-(
As for Hellfire - there is no clue to the girl's riddle and I realise now that it's one of the book's flaws. As for the inclusion of all of the red herrings, that's just me being evil.
Glad you liked the books because not everyone does ;-)
Have to agree with Zefiris.. House of Horror was a joy to read. It really took me back to the time I read House of Hades (the American title, at the time, and I believe the last FF book I ever bought) and how thrilled I was that a FF story could take place in a conventional setting and still capture your imagination.
Wow, it took some doing, but I completed Hellfire and its sequel Riders of the Storm! (And not without pouring over this guestbook for a few hints I might add!) I'd really like to take this opportunity to thank you, Mr. Phil Sadler, for creating a couple of works that greatly decreased the amount of stress I took home from my work by virtue of your enmeshing me in your imagination, prose and craftsmanship. It's been stated a few times before in this guestbook but I feel it bears repeating.. creating a fighting fantasy story can't be easy and, even then, it's purveyed to relatively few people. Yet, you poured alot of heart and soul into the endeavours, and for that you get a nice warm smile from me.
If you should read this, I have just a couple of questions and comments for you.
Regarding ROTS..
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There is a passage where you encounter some fairies, shortly after the mushrooms have switched your skill and luck levels. They shout 'Warrior!', until one of them says 'sadly' something to the effect of 'we have no business with you'. Is there something the player can do beforehand to avert this response, or is that just part of the story? I know, it's not an intrical part of completing the story, but I was just curious.
As for asking the Trinitour for help..*grinning evily at you*.. do you know how many times I died before I just started asking for his help at just any ol' junction! I was saving those "asks" for what I felt was going to be deep, deep into the game.. little did I know that I was supposed to use them practically right out of the gate! Clever, you.... You must've known that most FF players were practically 'hoarders', and would save anything they could (spells, provisions, et al) until the "Final Boss".. and would never "waste" something so inherently important to finishing the game at Junction One. ;)
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Regarding Hellfire:
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Though very difficult, I don't think too much was unreasonable. Solving the girl's riddle.. well, to be honest, I wouldn't have been able to complete the game without reading your hints to a previous reader years ago. I don't recall seeing a response to that question, come to think of it.. in the text version, is there a hint or an option as to guessing the solution to the riddle?
As per the Timespell, it took me a few times to realize that I should be using it at the junction before the acid river, not right at it.
I liked your inclusion of the necessary 'red herring' towards the end of the story.. but only after I'd finished it! It was only then that I could appreciate your humor, as I'd been through a few (including the long one going through the sweet smelling tunnel on until the secret-divulging cyclops.. if you'd taken that path, you couldn't finish the story! ;p)
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All in all, a very engaging few weeks. Thanks, again!