Actually Kee, I played through the book, and found that you can win it with a total of about 5 LUCK tests. Also, there are many, many ways of restoring LUCK. I've just finished the rewrite, and am going to send it in.

duffmeister
Tue Dec 16 19:18:10 2008

How's 'Rise of Skarlos'? I tried to remove the flaws which 'The Wrath of Cain' had (ie: Avoiding linearity and super tough villains) from it. Does it hold together well?

Kee
Wed Dec 17 09:41:06 2008

Um...Kekataag, are you sure that last comment was directed to me or Ulysses?

Anyways, any comments on my gamebook?

Kekataag
Wed Dec 17 12:27:09 2008

Oh sorry, you're right. Regarding if this was my first gamebook, the reply was directed to you, but the rest was for Ulysses.

Kee
Wed Dec 17 12:50:20 2008

It's fine. Speaking of your gamebook though, I'd like to know if an explanation regarding the importance of the Ebony Wand be included in the edited version of the book?

Kekataag
Wed Dec 17 15:15:48 2008

Actually it has been.

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Kee
Thu Dec 18 02:36:36 2008

Hmm, that's a pretty good way of getting the information to the player. I look forward to reading the edited version.

On the other hand, the Kargoth's my favorite monster in your book =D

Kekataag
Fri Dec 19 16:16:50 2008

Kee, it appears that there are a few grammar mistakes in your book. An example of this is in section 276

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Aside from that there are a few other mistakes.

And btw, I love some of the monsters and items in your book.

Kekataag
Fri Dec 19 16:18:31 2008

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Kee
Sat Dec 20 01:50:22 2008

Um, Kekataag, in section 276, the only thing written is:

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And regarding section 309, I was attempting to describe his face as being sharp and curved like claws though perhaps I did not achieve that.

Thanks for your comments, Kekataag, I'll go back and revise them. =D

Kee
Sat Dec 20 01:52:44 2008

I also realized that the combat system was a little too complicated in Welcome to Blackheart Asylum so I've simplified it in my new book, the Egyptian-themed 'Imhotepus' Mask.'

Kekataag
Sat Dec 20 13:00:41 2008

Sorry, it was

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Kekataag
Sat Dec 20 13:34:18 2008

Having checked, I found that it was section 227.

Haoie
Sun Dec 21 20:20:14 2008

Happy holidays and seasons greetings to all the regulars. Good luck for 09, too.

duffmeister
Sun Dec 21 21:02:53 2008

Sure, same, Merri Krissmiss all!

Stuart
Sun Dec 21 22:55:28 2008

Thanks, Haoie.

Merry Christmas and a happy new year to all too.

Kee
Mon Dec 22 09:23:43 2008

Ah, you're right Kekataag. I meant to write "a hiss of smoke."

duffmeister
Mon Dec 22 13:14:32 2008

Actually, I've just thought, have any Christmas-themed gamebooks, amateur or official, ever been written?

Phil Sadler
Mon Dec 22 15:42:40 2008

Happy Christmas all!

Kee
Tue Dec 23 04:29:34 2008

Hmm...actually duffmeister brought up an interesting point, a christmas-themed gamebook would be interesting. Maybe retrieving Santa's magical candy cane from the evil Grinch ~lol

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