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Benoît Smith Tue Nov 17 23:12:14 2020 A Saint Beckons |
Hi Robert, Thank you for such explanation - and for confirming that choice of narration was intentional and I hadn't missed anything :) However, I'm afraid I'm still confused...
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Anyway, I'll faithfully stick to that approach of yours in my translation - just subtly adjusting my sentences so that the French reader doesn't feel like some part of the text has been lost along the way :) |
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Robert Douglas Tue Nov 17 22:31:58 2020 A Saint Beckons |
Hi Benoit,
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Robert Douglas Tue Nov 17 22:26:34 2020 A Saint Beckons |
Hi Benoit,
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Benoît Smith Mon Nov 16 18:01:54 2020 A Saint Beckons |
Hi Robert, As I read the story once again, striving to translate it in smooth French, something about one key element somewhat disturbs me - belatedly, I admit. The dream the hero discusses with Prior Abbot Richmond then - optionally - with Brother Roubert doesn't seem to be mentioned earlier in the story. Is the reader supposed to imagine the dream in retrospect (based on the conversations), or may I have missed some previous information? Any hint would be appreciated! |
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Al Sander Tue Nov 10 03:03:43 2020 A Saint Beckons |
Very much enjoyed this. Didn't get the Mace, so narrowly lost the final fight. Found the initial paragraphs a little frustrating as it appeared that the outcome was always predetermined, but once passed this the pacing of the story and structure of the mystery were excellent. |
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King of the monsters Thu Oct 29 21:03:15 2020 Isle Of The Cyclops 
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Yazzzzz!!! |
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S CHEAH Sun Oct 25 22:41:16 2020 Hellfire
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A truly magnificent and super hard adventure of epic proportions! But one which was so damn hard it got extremely frustrating at times, so much so that one might just feel like pulling their hair out! There was times when I had to go back to near the beginning to go along the right paths in order to find the essential items required by the final foe at the end. |
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Addison Thu Oct 22 13:30:49 2020 Hellfire 
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i died.
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Addison Thu Oct 22 13:11:18 2020 A Saint Beckons
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damn... short journey but this is the first i've seen of this site, and i'll be returning many more times :) |
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Ironwolf Wed Oct 21 21:17:09 2020 The Black Lobster |
Amazing! Got both of the 'good' endings, and I'm not sure which is better. I only wish it had a sequel! |
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emilyna town Wed Oct 21 12:24:19 2020 A Day In The Life
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how I like this game |
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Emanuele Mon Oct 19 17:55:22 2020 Return To G15-275 |
@Ulysses Many thanks for your reply. I forgot to say explicitly that I deeply enjoy your style and stories. I hope one day you'll be able to complete the saga, at last. Thanks for all the hard work put into the episodes so far. |
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Blair, the Space Pirate Thu Oct 15 02:45:39 2020 A Saint Beckons
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First story, first try. Enjoyed it. Will be checking out others. |
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Condutas Mon Oct 12 18:31:41 2020 Deathtrap |
But by all means, use that text as you see fit. You deserve all the praise. It's a shame no more people have read it yet. |
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ffproject Mon Oct 12 18:26:12 2020 News |
The Aleff Greg Neill has sent me this collaborative gamebook, written mainly by him, Kieran Coghlan and Steven Doig. It is inspired by the Aleph in Spectral Stalkers. Download it here. |
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MPerera Mon Oct 12 08:23:16 2020 Rise Of The Night Creatures |
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MPerera Mon Oct 12 07:40:23 2020 Rise Of The Night Creatures |
Oh no, your hints were clear.
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meschlum Mon Oct 12 06:12:12 2020 Rise Of The Night Creatures |
Well...
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Phil Sadler Sun Oct 11 22:29:16 2020 Deathtrap |
Thanks very much for your detailed review and, if you don't mind, I'd like to put it on a few other forums here and there to try and drum up a bit more interest because what you wrote sounds interesting. |
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