It's fine. Speaking of your gamebook though, I'd like to know if an explanation regarding the importance of the Ebony Wand be included in the edited version of the book?

Kekataag
Wed Dec 17 15:15:48 2008
General Chat

Actually it has been.

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Kee
Thu Dec 18 02:36:36 2008
General Chat

Hmm, that's a pretty good way of getting the information to the player. I look forward to reading the edited version.

On the other hand, the Kargoth's my favorite monster in your book =D

Wayne Densley
Fri Dec 19 08:11:03 2008
Windhammer Competition

Just a note to thank everyone who made the Windhammer Prize competition such a success this year. Winners can be found at the prize homepage at http://www.arborell.com/windhammer_prize.html.
The Prize will definitely be going ahead in 2009 with notifications of the prize timetable and rules available from June 2009.
Regards
Wayne Densley
Chronicles of Arborell

Kekataag
Fri Dec 19 16:16:50 2008
General Chat

Kee, it appears that there are a few grammar mistakes in your book. An example of this is in section 276

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Aside from that there are a few other mistakes.

And btw, I love some of the monsters and items in your book.

Kekataag
Fri Dec 19 16:18:31 2008
General Chat

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Oscar
Fri Dec 19 17:02:33 2008
Publicity

Hello my name is Oscar Monteiro i recently addapted my first amateur book to an online version it can be played herehttp://ffgamebooks-online.co.uk the book is a the kill the beast by victor Chang any reviews or comments can be sent to my email offmto@gmail.com

Kee
Sat Dec 20 01:50:22 2008
General Chat

Um, Kekataag, in section 276, the only thing written is:

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And regarding section 309, I was attempting to describe his face as being sharp and curved like claws though perhaps I did not achieve that.

Thanks for your comments, Kekataag, I'll go back and revise them. =D

Kee
Sat Dec 20 01:52:44 2008
General Chat

I also realized that the combat system was a little too complicated in Welcome to Blackheart Asylum so I've simplified it in my new book, the Egyptian-themed 'Imhotepus' Mask.'

Kekataag
Sat Dec 20 13:00:41 2008
General Chat

Sorry, it was

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Kekataag
Sat Dec 20 13:34:18 2008
General Chat

Having checked, I found that it was section 227.

duffmeister
Sun Dec 21 12:34:34 2008
Riders Of The Storm

I have a question, what is the name of the 'Hellfire/Riders of the Storm series?'

Haoie
Sun Dec 21 20:20:14 2008
General Chat

Happy holidays and seasons greetings to all the regulars. Good luck for 09, too.

duffmeister
Sun Dec 21 21:02:53 2008
General Chat

Sure, same, Merri Krissmiss all!

Stuart
Sun Dec 21 22:55:28 2008
General Chat

Thanks, Haoie.

Merry Christmas and a happy new year to all too.

Kee
Mon Dec 22 09:23:43 2008
General Chat

Ah, you're right Kekataag. I meant to write "a hiss of smoke."

duffmeister
Mon Dec 22 13:14:32 2008
General Chat

Actually, I've just thought, have any Christmas-themed gamebooks, amateur or official, ever been written?

Phil Sadler
Mon Dec 22 15:42:40 2008
General Chat

Happy Christmas all!

Kee
Tue Dec 23 04:29:34 2008
General Chat

Hmm...actually duffmeister brought up an interesting point, a christmas-themed gamebook would be interesting. Maybe retrieving Santa's magical candy cane from the evil Grinch ~lol

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