Oh, and in relation to 'Cretan Chronicles' already having used the ancient greece setting, to be strictly accurate, my adventure is actually set in Mycenaean Greece, the period in which most greek myths occur, but not actually ancient greece as it is normally seen.
Hamza Moiz, aka Kekataag has sent in his gamebook Quest For The Ebony Wand, and I have put it on the downloads page. There is also an updated, and apparently debugged, version of Stuart Lloyd's Shadowcaster.
On an unrelated note, Oscar Monteiro has made an online version of Victor Cheng's Kill The Beast. It can be found here : http://members.lycos.co.uk/avfan/.
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I've already finished my gamebook and wish to submit it to this site so can I use like...Yahoo instead of Outlook since I have no idea how to use it and I don't have a Send button.
If I understand you correctly, you are talking about not being able to use the contact link because you only have web-based email. You can of course send your gamebook in using Yahoo. I'd ideally like to avoid posting the email address directly because I have enough trouble with spam as it is - but if you right click on the contact link and select properties, all should be made clear.
Omg, An Orc's Day is hilarious. I'm still working on it, but I nearly died laughing reading the Rules section. Its not a gamebook I'd play seriously, more like one I'd play for fun the thick humor completely floats my boat.
Two more additions to the downloads page. Ramsay Duff's notorious Rise Of Skarlos (chapters one and two) and also Welcome To Blackheart Asylum by Julius Lee (who is Kee, presumably).
Good site. I wish there were more sites dedicated to adventure games like this. Or are there? Does anyone know where I could find similar games?
Just a suggestion to all you writers; I think pictures to go with every scrip would be awesome. I know that your supposed to use you imagination, but to have graphic pictures to go along, I think, would make it even better.
Thank you for all your hard work writers.
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Well, this site has a links page at the top of which is a list of similar sites. It's not a long list, but if you are content with hyperlinked gamebooks or even plain text ones there are plenty more links to sites containing these.
Regarding illustrations - yes it would be nice to have more. But finding pictures to match the text is very time consuming - I got fed up of that activity quite quickly. The ideal would be contributions from amateur artists, but I think it needs to be of a comparable standard to the artwork in the published FF gamebooks in order to live up to the quality of the writing. In any case, only one artist in over five years has actually sent me anything. Another possibility would be authors themselves collecting together some artwork and writing their stories around it - but that's out of my hands.
Speaking of graphic pictures, I'd be happy to draw and ink some and scan them for anybody who wants them for their gamebook.
You'll need to gimme the description of the pic and ur email for me to send it to you though.
If you can produce decent artwork (as mentioned above, this would mean on a par with the published gamebooks in terms of quality, but could be much less complex), then I could definitely make use of it here. If so, I would recommend that you choose one of the shorter gamebooks and draw whatever scenes from it inspire you most.
So, what do you guys think of Quest for the Ebony Wand so far? I know it's horribly written and extremely disjointed (I put very little effort into it), but I just wanted to see what other people's opinions were.
I don't think it is actually possible to complete it legitimately, due to the large number of LUCK tests. I wasn't counting, but I am sure there were more than 11. I suspect that even a LUCK-12 character would have exhausted all of their LUCK well before the end, and then suffer the consequences of failing the remaining LUCK tests. Admittedly, I didn't find out what the consequences for failure were because I decided I was really lucky as I read through it (after failing the very first LUCK-test in the book left me with a spear jutting from my forehead).
This is a bit of a shame since the adventure started out with a lot of nice descriptive passages. But then it seemed to become rushed, and packed with too many battles. Furthermore, at least in the path I took (and certainly not in the introduction), the Ebony Wand was never mentioned until the moment the character lays eyes on it. I also never found any explanation of what the Ebony Wand was, or why it was important.
Sorry if it seems like I'm putting the boot in here, but I'm saying these things because I think you have shown you can write well, and if you were to put some more effort into this story, it could be improved dramatically.
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Hope that is helpful, and not offensive. Feel free to offer a counter-review :)
Actually this is probably my fourth and fifth finished gamebook. Regarding the LUCK tests, I'm sure that there were a large number of boss fights you had to win with almost every one of them awarding the player with LUCK points. Also, I mentioned that the book used the series' original rules (meaning the first few books). That includes the rule about the Potion of Stamina, Fortune and Skill you can get at the beginning of the early books. Other than that, I agree with all of your comments. The part with the merchant was especially badly written! Anyway, thanks for the comments.
Actually Kee, I played through the book, and found that you can win it with a total of about 5 LUCK tests. Also, there are many, many ways of restoring LUCK. I've just finished the rewrite, and am going to send it in.
How's 'Rise of Skarlos'? I tried to remove the flaws which 'The Wrath of Cain' had (ie: Avoiding linearity and super tough villains) from it. Does it hold together well?