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Ulysses Mon Mar 18 12:36:51 2019 The Dead World |
@ paul You've picked up on something a few other readers seem to have missed...
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paul Mon Mar 18 14:06:08 2019 The Word Fell Silent 
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killed in combat. this is an intriguing gamebook and i am looing forward to having another go. |
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Ulysses Mon Mar 18 14:10:25 2019 Gamebooks |
@Shadow In addition to the good advice above, I would add that you should perhaps think about the length of each adventure and begin with the one that is likely to be the shortest. My reading of the three ideas gives me the impression that: -The Dragon's Hoard would be the longest adventure with the most things to keep track of. -Halixor's Gauntlet can be as long as you want it to be, although the longer it is the 'richer' the story will need to be to avoid it just being a series of rooms that ends up becoming tedious. -Trial by Ice is the simplest premise and one that can work as a short adventure. I would avoid the temptation to do too much world-building and keep all of your story branches parallel rather than divergent. Obviously, I am recommending Trial by Ice, although possibly lesser in scope than you may have been imagining (you can also create sequels to enlarge the world later, perhaps writing an entire series and maybe even finishing it instead of leaving everyone hanging...). To help limit the scope and add an interesting angle to the story, you could have the Champion of the Lightning Goddess look on the main character with utter contempt, offering no explanations, just a stipend to accompany him/her. Part of the plot can be uncovering what the Champion really wants you to do and why you were chosen. The point of all this or a similar idea is to give the story a central plot beyond the quest itself, and allows the plot development to be more than just a series of events/enemies/traps, etc. Happy writing. |
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Gavin Mon Mar 18 15:46:09 2019 Gamebooks |
I don't think the protagonist of Day in the Life is combating alcohol consumption, Inebriation is meant to be your high score. I had the idea for a Day in the Life II where our thirsty hero explores the outsider art scene of Wolverhampton and Birmingham, but meanwhile the second mission of New Day Rising is reaching within measurable distance of its end. |
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paul Mon Mar 18 17:54:14 2019 The Curse Of Drumer
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killed by a vampire, oh the indignity. this was a fun gamebook, well plotted. some of the text is a little hammy, but it doesn't hinder it once you get into it. |
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paul Tue Mar 19 11:45:27 2019 Above The Waves
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why did i pick up a stick to fight the jaguar, i have a machete and hand to hand skills? |
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paul Tue Mar 19 17:43:34 2019 Devil's Flight
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bums, dehydration in the brig :( i like ths one, nice and mysterous. |
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paul Wed Mar 20 11:25:00 2019 Return To G15-275
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carnivorous plant ate me :( |
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paul Wed Mar 20 14:42:19 2019 A Knight's Trial
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shouldn't have touched the sphere :( |
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paul Wed Mar 20 16:49:42 2019 Nye's Song
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whoops, should have fought hand-to-hand :( |
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paul Wed Mar 20 18:22:24 2019 The Ravages Of Fate
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nowhere near! he still had 50 stmina points! |
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paul Thu Mar 21 13:59:39 2019 Tales From The Bird Islands
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killed by a hyena :( |
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Robert Douglas Thu Mar 21 15:28:22 2019 Nye's Song |
You're probably referring to
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paul Thu Mar 21 18:18:18 2019 Below Zero Point
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whoops, should have dodged! |
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paul Thu Mar 21 20:38:47 2019 Any Port In A Storm
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strangled by a lich :( |
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paul Fri Mar 22 11:34:54 2019 Escape Neuburg Keep
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the wrong sort of escape! :( |
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paul Fri Mar 22 16:05:49 2019 A Shadow In The North
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death by fire elemental :( |
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Metodej Fri Mar 22 17:41:23 2019 Garden Of Bones
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Finaly i get into this ffproject. Garden of bone is short, damn good written and hard as fvck. Played 5th time and still cant finish it! |
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paul Sat Mar 23 22:04:08 2019 A Flame In The North
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should have used words rather than action :( |
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paul Sun Mar 24 11:55:15 2019 Shrine Of The Salamander
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death by baddu-beetle! |
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